Sunday, May 6, 2012

A Wicked Temptation: Sestina


Inside, light and luxury are scant,
And if you aren’t careful, you could trip
And slip on steamy skin.
In the deep dimness each touch
Is a shock, each gaze scathes.
Their life’s work is to tempt.

And they work well to tempt
In their Gaussian lace and wire, scant
Of substance, ethereal touches that scathe.
Their lashes flutter, lips make you trip
And you are sent reeling as they beg, ‘touch’
While they splay before you their silken skin.

And oh how you moan at the feel as your skin
Slides lushly against yours, the tempt-
ation too much, all you can do is touch
And rip at lace, your will is scant
As sensation consumes you’re off on a trip
To the surface of the sun, blood heated to scathe.

They claw and cry, the sound is scathe-
ing. Your joy is purely skin
Deep, and your heartbeat skips, trips.
As your body is heaving, you at-tempt
To conceive, though chances are scant,
You’re too rubbery to get to that touch.

And in that instance you hate their touch,
And the fevered touches, so sweet now scathe
To make skin crawl, desire scant
You loosen, sweat-damp, chilled skin,
And though they try to rouse, they fail to tempt
You to make a return, or even finish your trip.

Yes this has been in vain, your veins trip-
ping up in flow, sickened now by touch,
You scream, a wicked desire, tempt-
ation to slice, strangle, scathe,
To tear at their milky, silky skin
Your control is too scant.

And as scant as the lace, so thin is your will, you embark on a trip,
A departure from cheap thrills, skin breaks to bleed beneath a steely touch,
And your words over them, shaking, scathe.  You went, but knew it was too tempting.

3 comments:

  1. Chelle,

    This is so provocative. And you're making amazing choices with your end words.

    Before I say more, though, I'd like to hear what you were trying to attempt, what scene you're wanting to draw.

    My comments won't be helpful unless I'm clearer about the situation.

    Dave

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  2. it's supposed to be, in short, about an unstable man who goes to a cat-house, is enticed by the girls, goes off with one, then feels disgusted, wants to leave, becomes enraged, and kills them. or at least a few of them.

    I hope that helps?

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  3. Its cool that you went with the sestina. I was going to try one but it seemed like way too much work/thinking for a Friday afternoon. It really made me feel kind of guilty myself at the end, though I could most likely not have figured it out if your comment wasn't there to guide my reading. I really like how your 6 words work in this poem. The t's and s's really add a lot to the imagery, it makes me perceive a steamy "tssss" sound which adds to the feeling of being in an akward, steamy situation.

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