Tuesday, May 22, 2012

Rough Draft of Final Essay: First Half


Strange Sexuality Makes Memorable Lyricism
            There are many things that people consider to be memorable, from a particularly well-crafted song lyric, to a horrific experience, extreme joys to births, deaths, and everything in between.  So it is no surprise that something as taboo as sex and sexuality, when used as subject matter in poetry, becomes a striking and memorable thing.  Sexuality becomes particularly fascinating when an author or poet shows it as skewed or twisted, something most would find abnormal.  There are a great number of poems that discuss such twisted sexuality, however, the ones I feel to be most relevant in this instance are Robert Browning’s Porphyria’s Lover, DH Lawrence’s Love on the Farm, and Allen Ginsberg’s Please Master.  What, then, makes these poems so memorable?  I believe Robert Frost addresses the memorability of poetry in terms of emotion, shock and surprise, and expression of the artist in his essay, “The Figure a Poem Makes,” which will aid in explaining why these poems are memorable to readers.
            Frost gives a basic assessment of what exactly poetry is, saying, “If it is a wild tune, it is a Poem.” He implies that poetry that only sounds good, with pretty words and lacking substance, is hardly poetry at all, in the lines, “No one but a humanist much cares how sound a poem is if it is only a sound.”  So, what does Frost think poetry ought to be all about?  “It should be of the pleasure of a poem itself to tell how it can. The figure a poem makes. It begins in delight and ends in wisdom. The figure is the same as for love. No one can really hold that the ecstasy should be static and stand still in one place.” Frost claims that poetry must be dynamic, offering the reader a story that twists and changes, not giving them exactly what they are expecting, but instead giving them a surprise.  Without this element of surprise, poets cannot expect their readers to remember what they have read.  Frost also argues that the writer must put real emotion into the poem, “No tears in the writer, no tears in the reader. No surprise for the writer, no surprise for the reader,” if a poet cannot be moved by their own work, they cannot expect their readers to be moved.  Since Frost expresses that poetry must be surprising and emotional to be memorable, I think he would agree that poetry with darkly sensual themes fits the These poems often depict people in compromised emotional states, relaying their fear or pleasure in great detail, causing empathy and revulsion in the reader.  And with subjects like murder and sexual domination, it seems that he would agree these poems are surprising and shocking, or at least would be at the time they were written.
            In Porphyria’s Lover, Robert Browning’s speaker utilizes a dramatic monologue, describing his act of madness and dark passion.  It starts on a dark, wicked night, “The sullen wind was soon awake/ It tore the elm-tops down for spite/ And did its worst to vex the lake,” and the speaker’s mood seems to reflect the weather as he, “listen'd with heart fit to break.”  The speaker is sullen as the wind, then in blows Porphyria, the man’s beautiful love interest.  There are early signs of his strangeness, though current cultural and social norms would make them far less noticeable, beginning to emerge as, “She shut the cold out and the storm/ And kneel'd and made the cheerless grate/ Blaze up, and all the cottage warm,” which would be a big societal shock, at the time.  He lets her light the hearth-fire, which should have been his task, as the man, and continues to reveal oddities, as he violates another social norm in the lines, “she rose, and from her form/ Withdrew the dripping cloak and shawl/ And laid her soil'd gloves by, untied/ Her hat and let the damp hair fall,” failing to help her off with her outer garments.  The poem gets even more strange as Porphyria seems to be putting the moves on the speaker in the lines, “She put my arm about her waist/ And made her smooth white shoulder bare/ And all her yellow hair displaced/ And, stooping, made my cheek lie there/ And spread, o'er all, her yellow hair/ Murmuring how she loved me.”  This would have been very untoward at the time this poem was written, hinting at some sort of bizarre relationship between the speaker and Porphyria.  All of this seems a little off, but nothing yet has been extremely memorable, only laying the groundwork of their strange intimacy, hinting at sexuality.  The shock that Frost demands of the poet comes at the sudden twist, after her admission of love, in these lines, “That moment she was mine, mine, fair/ Perfectly pure and good: I found/ A thing to do, and all her hair/ In one long yellow string I wound/ Three times her little throat around/ And strangled her.”  The speaker, after realizing that his secret admiration for her was mutual, decided to preserve her, as perfect as she was in that moment, and strangled her.  As though that wasn’t shocking enough, the speaker goes on to kiss and touch his love’s now-lifeless body, as though she were still alive, in the lines, “her cheek once more/ Blush'd bright beneath my burning kiss:/ I propp'd her head up as before,/ Only, this time my shoulder bore/ Her head, which droops upon it still:/ The smiling rosy little head,/ So glad it has its utmost will,/ That all it scorn'd at once is fled,/ And I, its love, am gain'd instead!/ Porphyria's love: she guess'd not how/ Her darling one wish would be heard.”  This, certainly, offers the sort of shock and surprises that Frost demands poetry must have.  Browning makes the reader feel revolted, and at the same time, bizarrely fascinated, unable to stop reading.  A concept such as this, murdering his lover with no provocation so that he can keep her perfect forever and continue cuddling and touching her, is absolutely a picture of warped sexuality, a very memorable sort of shock. 

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