Words, words, words
Mommy talks, I listen.
I talk too.
Words all the time
Are just words.
Words, words--Wait.
These are different,
These words are new
About fishies and silly
Pictures of fantastic pets.
These words are
Rhymey giggling sweet.
I like the Gink,
The pink-ink-drinker.
But best are fishies
Red.
Blue.
One.
Two.
These words are good fishes.
Words. Words. Words.
Very interesting and creative! I really enjoyed how you were trying to capture the confusing randomness of a child first learning how to read.
ReplyDeleteThis is very good. Expand it. Good linebreak at "silly."
ReplyDeleteRe-think the word "fantastic"?
This is great:
These words are
Rhymey giggling sweet.
I like the Gink,
The pink-ink-drinker.
Fantastic, as in fantasy/fantastical. I like it there
ReplyDeleteYou got that it was Dr. Suess, right?